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[YR] Down Under (2)
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dodgevipergts
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Joined: 31 Jan 2011
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 26, 2011 5:36 pm    Post subject:  [YR] Down Under (2) Reply with quote

This is my first public map please comment and if someone can tell me how to make the radar image look better.

EDIT: hows this lighting and i replased the Nuke with a Tech Secret Lab
Yet Another Edit: Deleted trees on the pavement

2 years later edit: As i plan to use this map i made 2 years ago in my mod, I have made some small tweaks, and better positioned the ore around the edges of the map, so that you can collect it all. I have also uploaded a better preview image. I may continue editing this map, so any suggestions to improve the map further would be appreciated

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Bugsey827
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You should probably change the lighting a bit. Even a slight alteration can give your map a much nicer feel and atmosphere, also, some bits look a bit flat, so I would make a bit bumpy, but not too much.
Other than that, looks pretty good.

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001010011100101110
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah definitely needs better lighting.

dem crevices maps, me like Smile

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FurryQueen
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 2:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lighting needs a serious tone down because snow is always WAY TOO DAMN BRIGHT. Could also use a better structure in the center like an airport rather than nuke silo. A silo isn't really worth quite as much honestly.
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Scorched Earth
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 4:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I spy trees on pavement.
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Crimsonum
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 6:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Guys, learn to take screenshots from the game, not the editor.
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Nikademis Von Hisson
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 8:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

trees on pavement could be where a tree grew through to surface
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dodgevipergts
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 10:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok i'll have a look at the lighting and maybe give you some ingame pics to

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OmegaBolt
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Why is it called Down Under?

Nikademis Von Hisson wrote:
trees on pavement could be where a tree grew through to surface
Then he should have really used one of the damaged pavement details to show that. ATM it just looks weird.
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dodgevipergts
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i don't really know i couldn't think of a good name for it

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001010011100101110
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 5:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

All I know is that it has nothing to do with Clones Down Under, or Down Under, and it's definitely not Australia.

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Shadow Hunter
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 8:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The name doesn't need to be related everytime, at least most RA2 maps aren't.

Well, IMO the way the buildings are looks too ugly, try to place them differently, soo they have like cool layout. (yeah i can't explain how to do that); same with bunkers next to the silo, do an special touch, like it's being supposed to be an secret or really defended, like cliffs and all...

Please, remove that tree from the pavement. #Tongue

IDK, but, the ores in the corners aren't too much strange?

And well, nice first map, it's looking really good, good job. Very Happy

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001010011100101110
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 1:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shadow Hunter wrote:
The name doesn't need to be related everytime, at least most RA2 maps aren't.

They're mostly bad puns or inappropriate metaphors. Razz

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dodgevipergts
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 13, 2013 6:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Updated

2 year bump, but seeing as this is my thread and map, it should be ok

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Lin Kuei Ominae
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 13, 2013 7:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

posting something constructive like an update or bugfix is never a bump. Wink
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DarkVen9109
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 2:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Suggestion: Make it look like NIGHT TIME Very Happy

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