Too many single pixel wide details, especially those striped pipe things on the side, and the ribbing on the top of the launchers...
Aside from that your launcher hot end is angled wrong if the ends are supposed to be straight cut, learn how to mimic the correct angle with stepping it. It might take a few tries to get it to look good but that's part of getting better _________________ http://www.moddb.com/mods/scorched-earth-ra2-mod-with-smart-ai QUICK_EDIT
Can you Imagine that I have been looking for the Russian "Bm-30 Smerch MLRS" voxel since maybe 4 or 5 years ago untill I just got very frustrated because I couldn't ever find it and just by luck I have just typed in the search the word "Rocket progectile" and I was seeking for some new projectiles for my mod, and I just like OMG It's the Smerch I finally found it
BUT can you imagine again that I made my own one despite my zero level experiency of any kind of graphic programs, and because of that I used a truck I found here belongs to a member here called "CREATOR" and to be exact from his S-300 design from this link
https://ppmforums.com/viewtopic.php?highlight=s300&t=44188
and ofcourse I used it because it matches perfectly the actual carrier of the rocket launcher of the Smerch
and about the rocket tube launcher it self I used an old rocket projectile for "AZRI-APOC" designed ICBM, And I ofcourse went through the route of copying and mirroring untill I made the 12 tubes of the actual Smerch
and I was over joyed when I fully completed the whole design.
AND I SWEAR I DESIGNED the turret or the tube rocket launchers BEFORE finding the truck maybe 2 years.
And now I wanna upload it here BUT I CAN'T DENY that I'm afraid of the bad criticizing and ofcourse I haven't built the whole design on my own
BUT there one thing for sure that I'm sure you will like it, "the camouflage" WHICH took very looooooong time from me to get it done beside my zero level of experiency of any graphic programs it really was tiresome when I tried to improve the normals and the coloring
so I would like to attach here at least its picture
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The rocket tube launchers or simply the turret after it has been just a rocket projectile made by AZRI-APOC as I can remember because I had it long time ago even before I have the Intention add the Smerch to my mod
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The original truck of the s-300 which made by the member "creator" after I did deleted it's original made turret by him
I swear man you just have no idea what your words did or means to me
THANK YOU THANK THANK YOU
you have no idea of how much I was afraid of some bullying of the modders or the super designers of PPM and ofcourse you are one of these skillfulled designers or programmers
BUT the whole credit must go to the member "CREATOR" thus he designed the truck and I swear I designed the turret just from one rocket projectile by copying and mirroring and a lot of of work via the voxel section editor which again I mention it I had no experiency at that time but resizing and changing the color scheme and for the camouflage?? I swear man that rocket projectile had no camouflage and I just ADDED IT THROUGH THE PAINT programme since it's only the programme that I can use some way in a good way
So your word have really made happy, Thank you G-E Thank you man
but do you think that I should upload it to PPM??? QUICK_EDIT
Haha I may be coarse, but that's because the world doesn't need more shitty assets, and we all need to elevate our game.
You did all the right things, you've simplified the textures with the renderer in mind, you fixed the face angles, and from a design standpoint you've scaled the features well.
I think if I'm going to criticize this one, it would be purely down to the fact that you have red lights on the front instead of white, and no tail lights.
You did all the right things, you've simplified the textures with the renderer in mind, you fixed the face angles, and from a design standpoint you've scaled the features well.
Well, I don't know what are the face angles so I dunno how I did fixed it, and all I'm caring about now is that you liked it, and about rendering I spent alot of days trying to understand what it's mean and aslo alot of days to render 3D designs via Blender but I was just like some one who is trying to read or write for the first time and it ended badly.
But I'm so happy with your praising.
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I think if I'm going to criticize this one, it would be purely down to the fact that you have red lights on the front instead of white, and no tail lights.
Oh come on man I just haven't touched the car or added these lights in the front and forgot the back, Its not my designation remember!
I just made the turret
May be accidentally I deleted the rear ones, I dunno BUT of course I do ACCEPT your criticizing for sure, I mean whom am I to refuse it when compared to any one of you guys in the field of designing voxels or SHPs you know what I mean
But please allow me to feel some pride for the MIND BLOWING camouflage hahaha I really worked super hard on that AND JUST FOR THE TURRET.
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I think absolutely everyone would appreciate this for download if you plan to release it
Hell yeah of course I will, but after some improvements like deleting that thing below the turret in it's middle that I thought it will look like the hydraulic arm that keeps the tubes up or down since I have been using a crappy car before finiding the current one now
Anyway it needs other Improvements but IF you want it as it is or you wish to do the improvement job JUST LET ME KNOW
Sorry for forcing you to read all that and thanks alot
And by the way I have made or "modified" another things I guess some one here on PPM may like it and trust me they were different things untill it came to my hand
check this one and trust me you will never know how or what it was look alike before or from where I took it to turn like what I made but ofcourse it needs improvements so be easy on me
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