TS outpost (my first building)

SMT · Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 4:21 am Post subject: TS outpost (my first building)

it is a cut and paste job but i like it. those things on the front are supposed to be helipads or missle silos.[/img]
It has damage frames and correct shadows

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ChielScape · Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 5:54 am Post subject:

doesnt look too bad for C&P

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Smilen · Light Infantry **Joined**: 30 May 2005

Lol... its alright.

Still a bit shit.

Might give someone ideas for a missile silo thing oringinal though.

Still...

Ahahah

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Elerium-155 · Commander **Joined**: 07 Mar 2005

It's bad. It's just a cut and paste job. I see them all the time, but even for a cut and paste job one has to make sure that a cut and paste fits in it's surroundings. He could have put in the extra effort to recolour the tower thats on top for one.

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Denmon · General **Joined**: 12 Jun 2004 **Location**: /S/weden

OMG that is the most impressive building ive ever seen! Ohh, can i have your autograph mr? please please!

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Crimsonum · Seth **Joined**: 14 Jul 2005 **Location**: Fineland

(I assume that's a joke, Denmon, it's his first building)

It's ok, but it needs colour work. Also, you just pull a straight black line to the "silos". Take example from WW buildings and you'll understand that it's not just making lines here and there.

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SeySayux · Cyborg Specialist **Joined**: 21 Jun 2005

If I wasn't bad either at making SHP's, I would laugh a little bit. It is a very good try, I hope I didn't made you angry. Like people told me, keep practicing and look to other ppl's work.

PS. I hope that ppl won't go laugh with my tank that's coming soon. (oops, that was a secret!)

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Lee · Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 11:48 am Post subject:

Maybe you should stick to building SHPs for the moment, as its the best thing you've made so far. Smile

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Dark Chaos · Vehicle Drone **Joined**: 13 Mar 2006

LAME

ihateharriers · Rocket Infantry **Joined**: 20 Sep 2005

Dark Chaos Industries wrote:

LAME

let's see what you can do.

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Stingerr · Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 2:16 pm Post subject:

indeed, most buildings ive seen here are cut and paste jobs. Even from you denmon. So stop bitching on him because he is new. I bet the people who are spraying shitty comments here are crappy shp-ers themselves and cant do nothing. Mad

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Red Dragon · Cyborg Commando **Joined**: 23 Feb 2006

it looks like a watch tower that has been paste on a GDI Upgrade center...

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Phatdaddymac99 · Cyborg Soldier **Joined**: 07 May 2005 **Location**: UK

Red Dragon wrote:

it looks like a watch tower that has been paste on a GDI Upgrade center...

maybe because it is...

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ruptioner · Disk Thrower **Joined**: 25 Nov 2005 **Location**: wales

well thats a pretty good job but you need the tower part to blend into the rest i suggest making the tower colour more sandy or the silo thingys etc more of a grey colour

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Zodiac · Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 8:05 pm Post subject:

Not very good for a C&P job.

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Dark Chaos · Vehicle Drone **Joined**: 13 Mar 2006

I have to agree with *above*... And i cant remember who told me to do a better job but if i was actually into the whole buildings thing then i would at least change the colour of the guard tower and change it so it looks different... sorry but its true.

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