Well for one its too small tyler, it lacks tons of details, its very plain , panther name sucks for it , fourth make the barrel longer what are you trying to do make it have a short barrel like the sheridan ? _________________ "Those who want to live, let them fight, and those who do not want to fight in this world of eternal struggle do not deserve to live." QUICK_EDIT
Also Known As: evanb90 Joined: 20 Feb 2005 Location: o kawaii koto
Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 11:52 pm Post subject:
Universal...was it all neccessary?
He can call that tank what he likes. Just because the Nazis made a tank in WWII with that name does not mean it is an attempt at it.
Kyler- it is far too small for RA2, even as a light tank. This unit would be best for Tiberian Sun as a light tank. It needs to be bigger- or remade a TS light tank.
However, it is a good attempt, and dont change the barrel length- it already looks questionably big, even in V2. _________________ YR modder/artist, DOOM mapper, aka evanb90
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a)lacks so many details (dam even look at the tracks)
b)longer gun barrel
c)newer name l
d)better visible remaps
e)better normals _________________ "Those who want to live, let them fight, and those who do not want to fight in this world of eternal struggle do not deserve to live." QUICK_EDIT
This Universal needs alot of improvement at the moment.
A) Not so full of himself.
B) Using proper grammar.
C) Some common sense.
D) A more constructive approach to criticism.
E) Know when to drop it. _________________ QUICK_EDIT
i like it.
you definately got yourself a good base to work with. keep adding detail, just dont go too crazy with it. but keep up. your getting better. _________________ Delirium.. QUICK_EDIT
Joined: 30 Jun 2006 Location: Oz, but near Melbourne, so its ok
Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 10:01 am Post subject:
Make the front lighter than the barrel - better contrast. Besides that, its size, and the autonormals, its not bad at all _________________
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Joined: 18 Feb 2005 Location: Star Kingdom of Manticore
Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 10:16 am Post subject:
TIP: add a very light colour (light grey or white) tip on the barrel like a fire suppressor or w/e it's called (sry, i'm more familiar with aircraft than i am tanks), it would be easier to see which way it's facing ingame with a light tipped barrel..
otherwise i REALLY like it.. allied scheme fits good
you should do a GDI version too. _________________ "Reality is a lovely place, but I wouldn't want to live there." -Adam Young QUICK_EDIT
Now thats looking way better congrats Tyler but seriously everyones saying make it bigger so make it bigger. _________________ "Those who want to live, let them fight, and those who do not want to fight in this world of eternal struggle do not deserve to live." QUICK_EDIT
I don't like the normals on the turret and chassis tbh...
And both those voxels are still pretty darn small... (make them like 30% bigger)
But so far, it's not looking bad at all. Keep up the good work!
You're doing pretty well for your FIRST voxel! Last edited by Alex06 on Mon Jan 01, 2007 10:35 pm; edited 2 times in total QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 10:34 pm Post subject:
The Chrono Miner is ginormous compaired to it...the humvee is fine, release that, but the tank....make him bigger, like 10-20% _________________ PPM's Reichstrollfuherer, 236th Trollenparties brigade. QUICK_EDIT
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