Tiberian Remnants Logos and Renders

ihateharriers · Rocket Infantry **Joined**: 20 Sep 2005

GDI and Nod Logos:

Updated ORCA Render:

New one of might be called the titan, but not quite sure yet:

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Raptor8 · Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 4:28 pm Post subject:

wow, cool what did you do them with 3dsmax?
The GDI logo is streched too much verticly, but teh nod one is awesome.

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ihateharriers · Rocket Infantry **Joined**: 20 Sep 2005

all of the renders are done in 3dsmax while the logos were done in photoshop.

the gdi one is a little more vertical because they are trying to re-invent themselves abit, and it's made to look sleeker, longer, almost more far-reaching if you will because they are rapidly losing ppl and territory to nod. it's a long story that still needs some stuff hashed out, i'm hoping to post it within the week though.

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bonzy_buddy · Shrapnel Sniper **Joined**: 31 Oct 2006

well then if it done on purpose, ok for thegdi logo.
Yet I think the nod's one is a bit too cartoony ; especially the sting itself isnt very nice.I reckon it should be more hooked

Von Kriplespac · General **Joined**: 01 Sep 2004 **Location**: Somewhere

Needs more work TBH, but, looking...eh..alright.

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ihateharriers · Rocket Infantry **Joined**: 20 Sep 2005

what's looking alright - the logos, the renders, what?

and how i can make it look "good" or "great" and not just alright? you guys need to help me out a bit here with constructive criticism and not just say that it looks "alright" or else it won't look any better Confused

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gamemate · Cyborg Engineer **Joined**: 23 Apr 2004

Some suggestions.

When doing up close renders, try to add more details. I would add some hatches and clear armoring (as in rivets and so on). I recommend that you use a different texture or more detailed one. As it stands now it feels like it does not belong on the tank Wink

Barrel would do good with a texture, pure black does not feel appealing, try using a glossy metal look instead.

Smoothness is quite bad for tanks in general, try to make edges sharper and more refined.

Ground texture looks very cartoony, I would imagine it to be cracked dirt with some minor grass in some areas. Try using the "Blend" material and mix different textures, add bump or normal map to get a bit more variation.

I am not sure what you are using lightwise but I would recommend a skylight, and if already used then lower the intensity some.

If you do not mind I could set it up for you so you can see how much difference it makes.

I am not trying to put down your work, just some suggestions to improve it Smile