Argarok

THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

Name:Argarok
Weapon:N/A
Cost:1000
Needed To Get It:Con Yard
Bio:The Argarok gives a new meaning to enemy at the gates! it is a giant mobile barracks!

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

yes, i didint like how it looked before, so i am remaking it, i am still detailing it.

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Morpher · General **Joined**: 28 Jan 2005

Sorry but lol @ Gufu. Weird concept however, not always a bad thing.

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Raptor8 · Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 2:48 pm Post subject:

its funny lookin'. id start laughing if this mech deployed near my base.

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

ok, i don't have to be a rocket scientist to relise that you guys think it looks like some kind of retarded evil pac-man, so i am reworking it. pics at a later time.

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

well, im not to happy with the head, but i like the legs.

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Team Black · Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 3:26 am Post subject:

well I can see you're trying to try different thtins, which is cool - but yeah it isn't exactly presentable just yet Very Happy

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I was thinking more along the lines of a chain-chomp with legs, but whatever.

TAKTICS concept, anyone? #Tongue

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

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gufu · Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 2:49 am Post subject:

I think it should "sit down"

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Ickus · General **Joined**: 25 Nov 2002 **Location**: @__@

its a pretty interesting design. but how does it functionally "eat" enemy structures? Neutral

(ie mandibles,tusks.tentacles?) that be an interesting concept of a base eater. chomping down on a fresh Consturction yard with a side of Barrack...mmmm turrets for breakfast. :p

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shinji · Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 12:11 pm Post subject:

either eats of chin guns other than theat its cool, but u neeed a new head

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

better? bader?

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shinji · Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 4:45 pm Post subject:

better chin guns plz yay chin guns

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

sarpedon wrote:

better chin guns plz yay chin guns

do you mean chain guns?

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shinji · Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 6:15 pm Post subject:

no guns on its chins

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Team Black · Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 6:40 pm Post subject:

Maybe it might be best to draw a concept first.

It's definitely better...but I wouldn't call it "good" just yet Wink

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The top definitely needs more shape to it I'd say, and the only "window" it should really have would be in the front. Windows are, usually, the weakest point.
the feet could be a little bit wider.

Here's what I might do:

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gufu · Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 6:57 pm Post subject:

Arf - change black to red and red to black at the chain guns...

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

its not a gunner! its a Barracks!!!!! and thanks for the concept Blackster, that gives me a good idea of what to make Smile

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Team Black · Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 4:32 am Post subject:

Glad to help, dude XD

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shinji · Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 12:12 pm Post subject:

you should keep some light guns for it so it can protect itself before it deploys

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

sarpedon wrote:

you should keep some light guns for it so it can protect itself before it deploys

yes, light guns mabye, but not huge frickin chin chain guns!

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Apex · Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 4:52 pm Post subject:

Maybe have the "chin" guns deploy into a turret beside the building when it turns into the barracks.

THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

well i made some additions Blackster suggested, and i added the damn guns, and i desided to work on a deploying ani.

what do you guys think?

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DeathMummy · Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 9:00 pm Post subject:

Thats one of the best mobile barracks i have seen so far...maybe a few more improvements-make the guns fold up instead of vanish and maybe the top open to let the guns out-apart from that-brilliant!!

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Team Black · Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 9:22 pm Post subject:

dude that's awesome! totally original idea - who'd have thought up a mobile barracks walking around?

I might fix them "chin guns" though XD
it dosn't quite make sense for them to dissappear into the body like that, then pop out of the top
XD nice job

PS. if you need any more concepts or anything, just give me a hollar OK

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gufu · Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 10:25 pm Post subject:

Actualy - make it legs fold under itself...

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

ok, i think i fixed the turret problem Smile

and sure blackster, if i need help you would be the first i would ask.

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gufu · Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 11:11 pm Post subject:

Legs still annoy though...

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

sorry didint see your post until now, i will do it tomorow, im all 3ded out for today.

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gufu · Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 12:06 am Post subject:

relax take your time...

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DeathMummy · Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 5:30 pm Post subject:

Looking alot better now Smile

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Machine · Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 6:56 pm Post subject:

Looking really better now #Tongue

Some suggestions. First make it's legs wider, specially the feet. Second, in the center of the circular bases of the chin chain guns, and the gun on it's top, put a black circle; since it looks somewhat odd that the guns come from nowhere Smile

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Also do what gufu said, "make it legs fold under itself", the deploy anim would look more natural in that way. Wink

Chrisse · AA Infantry **Joined**: 02 Mar 2006 **Location**: Sweden

looking really awesome, but i suggest you make the round part at the back more rektangular, otherwise very good design and something unique.

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shinji · Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 9:47 am Post subject:

its coool. Very Happy

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

made suggested modifications Smile

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gufu · Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:45 am Post subject:

w1n!

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Team Black · Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 4:56 am Post subject:

One last thing... the big round thing on the back might look better if it goes up earlier in the animation; like perhaps to give the legs some room or someyjing...

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THE Protagonist · Commander **Joined**: 19 Apr 2006 **Location**: The Etto

ok, that sounds good, im gonna do it tommorow, and i will mabye change some stuff or make walking anis, so i will be updating it alot more then.

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