Spaceport [TS] (WIP)

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I moved the Fuel Tanks onto the other side (aircraft where landing on the tanks, not the pad), also I found who stole the dishes, and they are now setting in 3'x5' cell Laughing

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Bako'Ikaporamee · Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 12:27 am Post subject:

looks decent, but the verdent color doesn't seem right, as well it doesn't look enough spaceport-ish, maybe some lights/beacon type things and maybe a bit more towards the control tower.

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Ickus · General **Joined**: 25 Nov 2002 **Location**: @__@

remaps need some tones and shading..its pretty good just needs more detail work...some strips..maybe a windsock. XD

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jadems · Medic **Joined**: 10 Jan 2005

I'd expect a Spaceport to be big a circular for ships, not like a runway.
And I think it'd fit in if it were a tad darker

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Chaotic General · Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 1:52 pm Post subject:

OK I went in and remade the spaceport, but it looks more like a outpost now, but it still looks good

^check out the new pic^

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Blade · Cyborg Commando **Joined**: 23 Dec 2003

What game is this for, it looks a bit blocky for TS or RA2 so I assume its for generals or TW, but you should indicate that in the topic IMO so people can make a more informed comment. IF this were for TS or RA2 I'd say up the poly count on those turbine things.

jadems · Medic **Joined**: 10 Jan 2005

Mmm, hope it's for TS. It already has the TS feel, knida.

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Bako'Ikaporamee · Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 10:38 pm Post subject:

looks much better, but where'd those satalite dishes go to?

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Chaotic General · Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 12:49 am Post subject:

Found the dishes.

It getting closer to being done

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Ickus · General **Joined**: 25 Nov 2002 **Location**: @__@

it reminds of me. of the Ultimate Doom buildings, complete with toxic pool. ^^

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Blade · Cyborg Commando **Joined**: 23 Dec 2003

You need more variety in the textures, those little pod things wouldn't be made of the same stone like material the tower is made out of for example, they would probably be metal spheres. They should also be made out of cylinders or UV spheres IMO rather than the beveled cubes they seems to be made of now. I also don't like the green you used for the landing bay, but that's not a deal breaker IMO.

Dupl3xxx · Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 12:31 pm Post subject:

It good, need some work, but good :p

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Bako'Ikaporamee · Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 4:39 pm Post subject:

Looks pretty good now dude! Like the others said, I'd make the pad not green(but that cylinder can stay green), and make the tanks round. Definitely DooM like, one of my friends was doing a doom rts but stopped working on it. His structures looked pretty similar.

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Chaotic General · Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 5:41 pm Post subject:

Hows this, I think it is near completion, I just need to make a damaged state.

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Ickus · General **Joined**: 25 Nov 2002 **Location**: @__@

Looking much better. I think maybe if you can separate the landing pad slightly away from the building. and also making the remap elements more true to traffic marking not to mention some tones.. Smile

@Xenology_311: Do you mean, The Battle for Mars?

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Bako'Ikaporamee · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 7:40 pm Post subject:

Indeed I do Ickus. That star port is definitely on its way to being completed!

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Lin Kuei Ominae · Seth **Joined**: 16 Aug 2006 **Location**: Germany

the remap parts look too clean. You should use a red texture for them.
And another small thing, the upper radar dish looks like a tube. It seems that the border is too thick.
But the rest looks very nice.

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