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Joined: 03 Nov 2007 Location: laptop? ... otherwise the Czech Republic -> south Moravia Posts: long int Posts;
Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 2:42 pm Post subject:
few things necessary to remember on when you make a cameo:
1. good shading - don't forget on ground, bottom side of turret, etc.
- brighter (sun)light, stronger shades
2. good lighting - look on photos of real objects
3. edges of the main object - edges shouldn't contain black or blue dots,
hide "Copy Pasta" origin with blurring these edges
4. diffuse colour - tank floodlit with twilight sun looks unnaturally in cloudy winter scenery
and few others
I see there are no shadow on that sand either on the unit (even when I consider those lights). _________________
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It's better but kinda hard to see any detail and it's too high on the cameo... generally keep the unit centred. I'd also just get a better background, one that suits the unit scheme more. QUICK_EDIT
Also Known As: evanb90 Joined: 20 Feb 2005 Location: o kawaii koto
Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 11:16 pm Post subject:
A good effort, but the vehicle itself is too small on the image. That unit is extremely large, as I said on MSN, you will need to cut out a portion of the chassis to show more detail on the rest.
Also, the background suits the unit, its just that the sun is behind it and the side facing the viewer is darkened as a result.
I'd recommend you have the light coming from head-on or at an angle.
The foreground, on the other hand, could be improved. Its too soft and smooth, and is generally undetailed. _________________ YR modder/artist, DOOM mapper, aka evanb90
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Deformat they r all good but you should make it look like an alied cameo(light colors and blue background) _________________ "I'll be staying strapped cuse my mac-eleven make my nuts bigger" QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 2:10 pm Post subject:
Funny, hier means here in Dutch, but apparently it also means here in Romania. _________________ ☭☭☭☭☭☭☭☭☭☭
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I like these last ones you posted Deformat, just mix some grass or darker soil in with the ground in patches. maybe a hill or a few trees wouldn't hurt QUICK_EDIT
albrecht that's my same version of the tank i posted earlier . if i had to guess who gave you that, it'd probably be Dregan (Mortecha). or Judeau. heh QUICK_EDIT
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