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Hmmm... Give it a single barrel instead of two, and I'm betting it would look a lot better. Alternatively, give it a single long artillery barrel (look at the old ARTY voxel in the TS .mix files) and use TurretOffset= to move the turret to the rear of the chassis (which might also need to be lengthened a bit) to create a nice mobile artillery unit.
Also, what DonutArnold said - did you remember to run the TS range autonormals on it? _________________ Adapt or die QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 9:44 am Post subject:
Normals
Yes I have made normals on it _________________ If you are a member of the NSA and you are reading this, then you should know, that too much curiosity killed the cat!!!
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Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 10:26 am Post subject:
Here is the new version!
Ok I have made a single barreled Version of my
Iron Fist Tank, without the missle launchers on both
sides of the turret and I have also made a new Artillery!
I call it Stingray so what do you think of it?
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The centered turret one is fine, they were designed for a private mod of mod of mine as a MBT so they shouldn't be a bigger-than-a-mammoth-tank size. QUICK_EDIT
The Stingray looks good, you should just have the turret and the barrel as two separate voxels, so that the barrel can elevate when firing at high angles (like the Nod artillery).
The Iron Fist looks decent... And I just thought of something: if you remove the single barrel and instead give it four smaller barrels (google the ZSU-23/4 to see what I mean), you should get a pretty impressive anti-aircraft tank... Also, remember to make the barrels a separate voxel, so that they can tilt up to point at flying targets when the tank fires at them. _________________ Adapt or die QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 6:43 am Post subject:
Ok!!!
Thanks for the tip, but I have to tell you
that the barrels of both vehicles are
already separate voxels. So they can
tilt up and down when they are firing! _________________ If you are a member of the NSA and you are reading this, then you should know, that too much curiosity killed the cat!!!
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Also, try making the barrel of the Stingray longer by about 5-8 voxels - at the moment, it is a tad short (unless you want it as a howitzer and not a proper long-range gun).
Will you try to make a anti-aircraft version of the Iron Fist? _________________ Adapt or die QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:07 pm Post subject:
You are right with the barrel!
I know that the barrel of the Stingray is too short,
but its just the first version of it and I will make
it longer in the next one!
But I don´t know if I wnat to make an AT-TANK
version of the Iron Fist!!!
Just let me think about it OK!?
You will see the result of my thoughts inside
my next post
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Same as with the hovercraft voxel. Too small and too bright. Never (unless it's a front light or something) use white on your voxels, and use slightly darker remap colours. _________________
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everyone of you guys except for Crimsonum,
because his comments were not very constructive!!!!!
Seems like you keep ignoring a lot of comments around here anyway. Again your new voxel is too small. Wolverine was one of the smallest vehicles in TS and these are all smaller than that. Once you've made them bigger you can add more detail, and don't forget to use different shades of colours.
Oh, and white/bright grey is alright in some places, for example on fuel canisters and lights. _________________
everyone of you guys except for Crimsonum,
because his comments were not very constructive!!!!!
Do you even know what constructive criticism is? You're not going to get any better if people keep giving you useless and false feedback on how to improve. Crimsonum is one of the only people in this thread giving you real constructive criticism. He is also a very good voxel artist so If I were you I'd pull your head out of your own ass and listen to him. I'm with him on this one by the way, all the voxels in this thread have poor texturing, coloring and are extremely small, but on the bright side you're getting the shaping right at least. Just keep practicing and listen to peoples feedback and you'll get better, but only if you're willing to accept criticism, if you're not, I know a nice place where you'd fit in will. QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 10:26 am Post subject:
Ouch!!!!!!
You two just have to read what Darkstorm wrote
in this topic, because I made the models for him!
The size and colourscheme of these vehicles were
ok with him and nothing else matters!
But Crimsonum that criticism was really
constructive, thanks for that and I will follow
it in my next projects!!!
Because I am done with this one!
Quote:
If I were you I'd pull your head out of your own ass and listen to him.
P.S. You are gone too far Aro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! _________________ If you are a member of the NSA and you are reading this, then you should know, that too much curiosity killed the cat!!!
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 4:58 pm Post subject:
Oh yes you are gone too far!!!
If you want to offend somebody just go to a pub,
otherwise let those sayings be!!!!! _________________ If you are a member of the NSA and you are reading this, then you should know, that too much curiosity killed the cat!!!
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How does that work? I'm a bartender, people hardly offend each other in this business, we all just like to get drunk.
You're just neglecting whatever comments are harsh but true. If you don't listen to proper feedback and negatives then you're never going to get better. You're not proving that my "Your head is up your own ass" statement is wrong when you keep ignoring feedback cause you think your work is god-like when it's not. QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 5:08 pm Post subject:
You don´t get it!
Just forget about it, you are too stuck up!
The cleverer give in and thats me! _________________ If you are a member of the NSA and you are reading this, then you should know, that too much curiosity killed the cat!!!
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Stick your thumb up your butt. People give constructive criticism to help out. Being dramatic is dumb; people post to help you out. Don't be another Deformat. _________________ Please, read the signature rules of the forum. QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 7:01 pm Post subject:
Thats an misunderstanding!
I just wanted to share this voxels with everyone
who likes them, thats all! _________________ If you are a member of the NSA and you are reading this, then you should know, that too much curiosity killed the cat!!!
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:33 am Post subject:
R.I.P. Iron Fist... etc.!!!
I just wanted to share this before I have deleted
the original data!
I know that there is very much work to do, but I
really don´t need them myself and thats why
I said "I am done with this"!
I only want to say that this project is already
dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am so sorry for stealing your time with that shit!!!
P.S. Excuse me please!!!
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