looks for Voxel veiwer you might get clipping with the Turret ingame might not be a problem but you never know. judging by the picture it looks a little bigger than a m1a2 Abrams. _________________ Link to a document to see what mods i have and/or working on or working with
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The problem is it needs "more" but I'm not exactly sure what that "more" is.
Any suggestions as to what it needs to be completed ?
Make the surface not that plain.
e.g.
-On the side you have these 1 voxel dark vertical lines which give the side of the tracks some kind of armor plate look. I'd suggest you make the brighter normal colored part (the whole rectangle) stand out by one voxel, so you see better ingame these separate armor plates.
-the turret could get the armor plates look from the side of the tracks too
-on the front you should intrude the part between the remap areas by one or more voxel, so the remap part stands out one voxel to the front compared to the part in between.
-small details would be nice like a drivers hatch, a small hook on the front so it can be towed off, head- and backlights, a ladder on the side of the chassis and turret to climb up to the turrets top hatch
-since it's shape is like a howitzer, i'd also suggest you separate the barrel so it can tilt ingame for the ballistic shots. _________________ SHP Artist of Twisted Insurrection: Nod buildings
One better word: Details, maybe turn those vertical lines into a proper set of armour panels by closing off the tops and adding some shading inside. Add a colour gradient from the base of the turret so it doesn't blend so much into the body. _________________ Albrecht never dies, he just goes to the nearest bar to regroup. QUICK_EDIT
Darker remap and add more detail to the turret. It blends in the body pretty well, which is only a bigger problem because the tank itself camouflages in with the TS Terrain so well. Its a good shape though. You got talent, fix it up and this could make a sick tank. _________________ Victory! QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:35 pm Post subject:
You got a good basic shape down. I would suggest you look at pictures of modern tanks and take note of the bells and whistles those have.
For specifics to this vehicle-
-Engine (see the back of the M1 Abrams)
-Commander's MG
-Headlights, (red) taillights
-Smoke grenade launchers
-Muzzle brake on the barrel
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