Not bad for a second try. Here are some suggestions:
Sweep the Turret back
Make the Turret Flatter, add some antenna (You can never go wrong with Antenna)
Maybe you could put a camera on the side of the turret to help with aiming.
Make the Barrel longer and maybe thicker
Add a cockpit to the Body at the front
Make the back engine things bigger and add some blue the thrust (Orca thrust is Blue)
The Model is pretty good just needs some refining.
Keep up the goor work.
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 3:33 pm Post subject:
Denmon, less of the insults. Give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism if anything, just claiming that a voxel is crap will get you nowhere. How would you like it if everyone else said the same back to you without trying to help you? _________________
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I'm modifying the voxel a bit..... 1000 bits . I'll make something similar to the hover MRLS from TS. 25% done.
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 5:25 pm Post subject:
Firefox is the pwnflakes. oh,and denmon,you really should lay off the rude comments. i like it. its based off of a HEAVILY edited 2TNK,atleast the barrel is. but whatever. i like it,it needs more work,more detail. Remap's fine(i'd remove it on the barrel,though...might look odd ingame.),maybe add some antenna's? :S _________________ PPM's Reichstrollfuherer, 236th Trollenparties brigade. QUICK_EDIT
I dont know where did you have that idea, but I used it too... Anyhow, the new vxl is done, but .....color problems . I have 3 pink vxls and I cant get rid of them. QUICK_EDIT
Jah, I was waiting for ya.
Here's mine. I dont really like the turret I made, but I wanna see what others think of it. I think I should make the tank bigger, let's say 25% bigger, but I dont know how, cuz I got stuck with the resize thing in VXLSe.
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Because of virtual memory probls on my pc, I'll put a small pic.
Your's is nice, but its too much like the TD Stealth Tank... Personally I tried to keep the compostition of the Hover MLRS, leaving the turret at the back, and slightly 'sunken'... _________________ in 2009 to Florence. Viva Italia! QUICK_EDIT
The Hover MRLS part.... I kept another window open with it and I tried to make both vxls look the same.
But your kinda right. It looks like a stealth tank. Well, it was time for GDI to have a stealth tank . And about the turret, it's a Hover Tank, not MRLS. Tanks usually have the turret on the body's middle part. QUICK_EDIT
Thats where you're right... But now I dont give a ztype, cuz I'm drinking Alushta godlike portwein, made in the Crimea, listening to the Nina Simone's godlike music and smoking the red Marlboro... I wish you feel the same... _________________ in 2009 to Florence. Viva Italia! Last edited by Jah on Sat Jun 18, 2005 10:24 pm; edited 1 time in total QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 11:27 pm Post subject:
Jah, you're double posting far too much. Don't, please. Also, you shouldn't have that antenna there, since the turret will overlap it. That will look rather odd now, won't it?
As well, that's a rather good piece of work, Havoc. _________________
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Hover Tank [TS]
. I'll make something similar to the hover MRLS from TS. 25% done.
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