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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 1:43 am Post subject:
Looks really good
I may not be the right person to evaluate shps, but if you want suggestions for improvement, there are some small things I'd like to point out:
- In the buildup animation, the silo has a rather big colour change from one frame to the next (before the snow comes in). It would look better if it happened gradually.
- The opening and closing animation would look better if the "doors" accelerated a bit, rather than moving at constant speed, but I guess this could be hard to achieve without a larger amount of frames.
- When the silo closes in the open/close animations, the brown "thingie" (that folds down in front of the missile) disappears one frame before the doors are completely closed.
Anyway, very nice work. _________________ QUICK_EDIT
I may not be the right person to evaluate shps, but if you want suggestions for improvement, there are some small things I'd like to point out:
- In the buildup animation, the silo has a rather big colour change from one frame to the next (before the snow comes in). It would look better if it happened gradually.
- The opening and closing animation would look better if the "doors" accelerated a bit, rather than moving at constant speed, but I guess this could be hard to achieve without a larger amount of frames.
- When the silo closes in the open/close animations, the brown "thingie" (that folds down in front of the missile) disappears one frame before the doors are completely closed.
Anyway, very nice work.
Thanks, I'll be sure to fix that! _________________
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I may have already pointed this out, but the biggest issue with that model was that when the missile is launched, it would be visible from behind the structure. _________________
The plank(brown thingie) changes to gray on the 1st frame of the closing animation but changes back to brown form the rest. _________________ Comcast: Yo dawg we herd yo were downloading, so we put fail in yo modem so yo cant download while yo failin! QUICK_EDIT
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