WIP 2 tanks

Biohazard · Commander **Joined**: 17 Jan 2008 **Location**: MD,USA

here are 2 things i am working on. CONSTRUCTIVE criticism ONLY please.

(note : the allied tank is using the gattling tank turret offset. although it is a good indicator of where the turret is supposed to be)

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Lin Kuei Ominae · Seth **Joined**: 16 Aug 2006 **Location**: Germany

not bad
the tracks on the allied are too white; more detail is needed on them
the textures of both look very simple, like you used only 2 or 3 different colors. This makes them look very cartoony.
The allied tank has the black dot syndrom; reduce the voxel dot distance or add some voxel behind the existing so you can't look through them
The allied tank would scrap its own tanks/antennas on the back with the barrel, if he turns the turret back.

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Biohazard · Commander **Joined**: 17 Jan 2008 **Location**: MD,USA

ok thanks LKO i guess i will scrap the turret and barrel and just make ti have a non movable turret and barrel. like teh tank destroyer

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Blueguard · Cyborg Specialist **Joined**: 22 Aug 2007

Thats a good idea. You should also make the yuri's tank's barrel straight.

Dupl3xxx · Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 10:25 pm Post subject:

On the traks, make them "flat" or close, and just add texture useing photoshop or GIMP or something; I do it all the time. And the normals on both tanks could be better, espesially the allide one Wink

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