Bulletproof Pointman

Lt Albrecht · Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 5:27 pm Post subject:

I went to turkey 3 times and they have those things everywhere, they sell them, give them for free, hell I'm surprised they don't build a big one you can see from space...

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areaSZ · Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 1:40 pm Post subject:

please pick something ,that you think it needs arrangement or change

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Deformat · Defense Minister **Joined**: 17 Sep 2007

Its perfect.

Elerium-155 · Commander **Joined**: 07 Mar 2005

I love this, although as nitpicks that need work I'd say would be the flame in front, the blurriness/brightness of the sky, plus the shadow of the tower in the background stands out too much.

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Team Black · Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 9:35 pm Post subject:

well, very impressive, as always Na-rae Very Happy

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Lin Kuei Ominae · Seth **Joined**: 16 Aug 2006 **Location**: Germany

I have problems to sort the green flag behind the pointman into the picture. Is it so sharp because it belongs to the pointman?
If yes, does the blurry flag in the background mean, that there is another pointman? Do all pointmans have this kind of flag?
If no, why is it so sharp/close and the other so blurry/far away?

I also can't find out what the blurry thing behind the pointman is. Is it another pointman or just the shadow of the front pointman?
If it's the shadow, on what does the pointman cast his shadow? It looks like even terrain on which he stands, but the shadow looks like he stands in front of a wall.

Other than that, the pointman itself is great. I also like the bullet impact and trail on the right side. It looks very realistic. Maybe you can add more bullets with some of them missing the pointman, so you see him under heavy fire which is obviously no problem for this tough armored guy. Though his left arm is a bit unprotected and could be quite easy hurt. Maybe you can make the bullets come from the front so his chest armor blocks the bullets.