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Venom Electric Pulse tower
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Cranium
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 10:10 pm    Post subject:  Venom Electric Pulse tower
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Heres a concept for my new Electric Pulse Tower. Will replace the current tesla tower. Keep in mind it is only concept at this point and needs alot of work still.


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Cranium
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 11:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
update


Meh, I dont think I'm gonna use this. Looks to much like a prism tower. In the scrap bucket it goes.


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Deformat
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 1:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
I like it. Kinda lighty, but I suppose that's your scheme.

Dunno, maybe it would've been a tad more interesting if the turret was longer and the tower a bit smaller, but then it might be me.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 2:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
IMO, a few more detailing would do the job.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 8:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
love it. imo, keep it

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Cranium
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
How bout this?


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
I would suggest removing the prism-y stuff at the top.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 10:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
Those rings around the tower looks like plasticine. :S

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 11:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
Orac wrote:
I would suggest removing the prism-y stuff at the middle.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
Cranium wrote:
How bout this?

those rings should be a lot thinner.
still, I like the first design more

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 2:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
Orac wrote:
I would suggest removing the prism-y stuff at the top.


I would not.

They're probably the most detailed part of the whole thing.

I think it would be better if the lower part would be done better.
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Orac
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 8:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
But, Deformat, if he's trying to get away from the Prism Tower look then it would be better to remove the Prism Tower influenced stuff and focus on everything else, would it not?
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Shadow Hunter
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 8:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
It looks like an prism tower depressed. XD

But it's looking great. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 10:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
really isnt to much you can do with type of thing. So I think I finally came up with something I like.


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 12:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
I made some modifications to the base and tower thickness and almost ready to put this into game. Look good?
Top sphere will rotate and I'm working on the electric charge anim now.

Almost looks like a fricking Christmas tree, lol Laughing


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 12:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
It looks more cute than threatening tbh lol

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 1:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
Death Cultist wrote:
It looks more cute than threatening tbh lol


all the better. This way when they walk up to it thinking, awww, look that is so cu.....ZAP! Laughing

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 2:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
New look, I didnt quite like the last design.


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Deformat
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 12:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
That ball. It requires fixing. I mean it.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 5:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
whats wrong with the ball? anyway heres what i got so far. It's not written in stone yet.


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 7:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
^^ thats great. Is that the final size?
Some things I recommend:
- Make the tesla bolt white, and a bit thinner
- remove the soviet logo from the ball.
- make the spring(spiral thing) grey, so color other than soviet color is used

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 8:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
The electricity looks white to me, IMO it should be blue though - would be more obviously electricity. The Tesla ball on top would perhaps be better plain white and without the spike above as ATM it doesn't look like a weapon.

Excellent quality work though.
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Cranium
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 7:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
@ArvinCool, na this here is the final size.

Does this look better then?


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 8:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
Sorry, I cant add extra attachments right now. So I have to post a new reply for this.


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
looks better now. I think the tesla bolts should be used as charge animation, and not use those bolts as idle anim(because the bolts kinda hide a lot of detail)

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 12:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread
ArvinCool wrote:
I think the tesla bolts should be used as charge animation


yeah, i thought about that already. I may just make some smaller electric bolt anim for active anim. But I also had a plan to make the middle of the structure glow in unison all the way to the probe sticking out the top of the ball.

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