Joined: 25 Aug 2004 Location: DAS BOOT IM DER OSTSEE
Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 9:39 pm Post subject:
Good Design. but the texture blows. its bland,and boring. sorry man...just not impressive... _________________ PPM's Reichstrollfuherer, 236th Trollenparties brigade. QUICK_EDIT
It's just too boxy, the turret looks too far forward, the white should be a dark grey or dark remap and it needs a more interesting base. It looks like you took the Tesla Tank base, shortened it a bit and it looks as though you took the design of the Scorpion Tank from Generals and raped it.
Overall: not good. Do some details work and it should improve.
Also, don't just give me a 'w/e.' Acting like a n00b will not improve your skills and I'm tired of your "I'm a god and your opinions don't matter" attitude. _________________
Joined: 09 Feb 2005 Location: Back at the slig barracks
Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 10:23 pm Post subject:
IMO.Change the colours and darken it.It does look like a tesla tank with a scorpian tank barrel though.You may want to rounden it a little bit but you want to make it a bit more interesting,add a missile launcher or anntenne or something. _________________ Indeed QUICK_EDIT
Joined: 25 Aug 2004 Location: DAS BOOT IM DER OSTSEE
Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 6:54 pm Post subject:
the barrel should be black,like every other voxel,though,ironicly,every tank IRL has a camoflaged barrel... _________________ PPM's Reichstrollfuherer, 236th Trollenparties brigade. QUICK_EDIT
Reminds me of the ISU-152... just without the texture, that is. Try using the texture util from VXLSE III to apply something basic. The design looks promising, it is just going to need some more TLC from yourself _________________ Evolve or die! QUICK_EDIT
Now that I look at it again, the current position of the turret gives it the feeling that it'd tip forward when going downhill.
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Err a tela tank wtf ru talking bout i made that from scratch scorpan wtf again.
It's just what I see. If you study the designs of both vehicles, you MIGHT see where I'm coming from. Since that's unlikely, you'll continue your fruitless attempts to make something worth using. Besides, we need in-game shots. Viewer shots mean nothing.
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Could a moderator please prune this topic and get rid of the spam posts?
Sweet tank but it doesn't resemble power. Looks like I could take it on with a humvee . Anyway maybe more details, Like a monkeyhead from the hatch . Poko the monkey... or was it pogo? _________________ Criticizing n00bs is like booing at the special olympics. QUICK_EDIT
At a push, it is reminiscent of the Russian SU-85 tank destoyer - the hulls are very similar, and both have a boxy structure mounted at the front of the tank.
Either way, it is a *very* bland-looking tank. Some detail on the upper hull, wheels and turret would be good. Also, add a proper mantle and maybe a muzzle-break too?
The barrel colour is fine IMO - in most Allied RA2 units, the barrel is merely a darker colour of the unit's base colour (eg, Grizzly, Mirage). Only Soviets use a dark grey barrel (Rhino, Acpocalypse).
Russian SU-85-1943 Model.gif
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This is the Russian SU-85 that I made for DDay. It is in perfect scale, and has lots of detail that might inspire you.
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