Offshore Barrage Ship - NOD [TS] ~ daTSchikinhed

daTS · Last edited by daTS on Sat Aug 13, 2005 9:48 pm; edited 2 times in total

Im about done. With it.. Im not going to bother with a texture ATM.. I dont think im going to give it one.. it looks fairly good without one.. All red parts but the NOD logo is remappable.. yes even the flag on the rear. Your thoughts?

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Lee · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 8:05 pm Post subject:

I think you should raise the turret abit so it looks like its on a platform, if you know what i mean.

Its a very good ship btw. Smile

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Lok · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 8:11 pm Post subject:

very nice, ill just state the problems with it though,
1. its goes way to high
2. The cannons arel ike bigger than the boat itself

But otherwise its a good design, try to fix those things and it will look better Wink

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LazerAce7 · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 8:13 pm Post subject:

I don't like it, it doesnt look very nod like nor does it look like a ship of war.

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daTS · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 9:36 pm Post subject:

Ive done a little turret correction and a bit of HVA correction.

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Sorrow · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 9:41 pm Post subject:

It's too narrow.

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VW x frt · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 9:42 pm Post subject:

I don't like it yellow Confused

more gray!

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daTS · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 9:47 pm Post subject:

WTF!? Yellow? your colorblind.. anyways.. I realised NOD needed a naval ship.. so I made one for them.. as for its narrowness... deal with it.. Im updating now so somebody move this to FINISHED VOXELS please.

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Lok · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 9:55 pm Post subject:

uhhhh, by yellow he means tan color, and yes it looks better with only 2 cannons now but you do iether need to make it wider, or less tall

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daTS · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 10:24 pm Post subject:

No.. YOU are the one complaining.. Im happy with it.. ur not.. so its your problem. so deal with it.

EDIT: Post above me has been removed.. so.. jus ignore this one.

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Remus · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 10:54 pm Post subject:

I'm going to have to agree on the points made by others:
1. The tan bridge and overall color scheme makes it seem more suited for GDI...overlooking the giant Nod logo on the side...
2. The hull does seem too high. I wouldn't necessarily say it's too narrow, but there's definitely something off on the proportions.

Honestly, I think your other naval voxels are much better than this one. Not saying this one's bad, just that the others are better. Otherwise, remaps look good. I really like the idea of the remap flag at the aft of the ship.

daTS · Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 11:51 pm Post subject:

OK well I will shorten the hull and change the gold to nod scheme.

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Clazzy · Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:11 am Post subject:

1. Way too thin, in fact it looks anorexic.
2. The colour on top is far more suited to GDI than Nod.
3. I wouldn't say Nod are the kind of side to use large cannons like that. That's more of a GDI thing.
4. I think the scorpion tail is at a rather odd angle, the base of it should be perpendicular to the base of the logo's border, not on its side.
5. Other people may disagree, but I think you should smooth parts of the hull a bit more.

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Banshee · Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:37 am Post subject:

A certain post disappeared and I don't need to say why:
http://www.ppmsite.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4133

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daTS · Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 1:39 am Post subject:

Ummm banshee.. you forgot to move this to the finished voxels forum.

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Clazzy · Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 1:55 am Post subject:

Done, but you could have tried to listen to some of the suggestions given.

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daTS · Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 2:51 am Post subject:

daTSchikinhed wrote:

OK well I will shorten the hull and change the gold to nod scheme.

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DedmanWalkin · Grenadier **Joined**: 20 Dec 2004

I would think that a Nod Cruiser would follow the emblem of Nod and use a scorpion-like/stealth boat-like vessel similar to this.

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daTS · Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 3:34 pm Post subject:

Yes but you see. I made the voxel. so.. I like it.. of course.. I will shorten and fatten the hull and change the gold to a textured grey...

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Sk8erkid · INSANE **Joined**: 16 Aug 2002

Nothing is perfect the first time chikinhed. The reason for posting in the graphics forum first would be to [b]get[/b] tips like those given before it is moved to completed, that way you get the publics opinion on your work before releasing it and you can release to their standards. If it was for your own personal mod then you can go ahead and ignore any comments and do what you want. Because this is a public work, should you not provide us with what seems to be the general consensus of how the unit should look?

Ignorance is bliss.

LazerAce7 · Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 9:20 pm Post subject:

I dont like dead man walkins boat ethier doesnt look sleek nor realistic

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GeckoYamori · Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 10:02 pm Post subject:

Actually it reminds me of some high-speed boat developed by the Soviets.

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Vincent93 · Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 3:35 am Post subject:

They look civ (i mean both Dats' and Deadmans).
But Dats if you make it grey it would look very nodish, and i beleive no longer civish.
Deadman you would do well to do the same.
Edit: Oh right i am hecka smart i mean Dats not Tyler

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