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Crimsonum
Seth


Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Location: Fineland

PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 11:24 am    Post subject:  Twilight Time
Subject description: A short story I wrote...
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Twilight Time

Part 1:

The sun rises behind a tall cliff. Year is 2047. Greenish clouds look like that they “eat” the remaining white clouds, remembering us from how great place world was. Now people understand it better than ever. Now when it’s almost destroyed. Now, when there’s almost nothing familiar left of it. Now, when it’s growing into a something, something very dark place, that we’d ever have imagined. We don’t understand what a paradise the world was, not until we’re losing it. I wish we had newer revealed the secrets of the Tacitus. Maybe they wouldn’t have come if we wouldn’t have opened it. Who knows? Or, maybe they would have come with even bigger squadron at the future. Still, the world is a place not to live anymore. I don’t even understand why we fight. Maybe I’m loosing my faith…*presses the side of his helmet, and the visor turns into a binocular-looking mode*
“Zoom little”, I said, and the visor zoomed the visible area.
“Zoom medium”, I said, and saw a platoon of Scrin Whistlers.
The Whistlers gave first a low, then twice a shrill sound. We had studied their voice, and when they gave first a low, then twice a shrill, meant that they’re wounded, and searching for help. I grapped my railgun, and I got a strange feeling. I felt a great desire to defend my home to the until the end. I went down the cliff, and ran towards the Whistlers. I would not let them ruin my world!

I may wrote another part, so I named it part 1 for a sure.

any comments?[/b]

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Tyler Adams
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Joined: 08 Oct 2004
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 10:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Impressive..

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Crimsonum
Seth


Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Location: Fineland

PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 3:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

yippee, I made another part
(Btw, the title of the first part Last Moment Of Thoughts)

Part 2

Dream Well

Pain...pain....pain...is that it? is that the only thing I will have anymore? I've lost everything, my property, my...children, my husband, but the pain, and it's friend suffer. Why can't they go away, like everything else has? Why do they have to follow me, even when I can't move? Here I am, thinking my last words, watching me dying, seeing Tiberium takeing control of my body, mutating me into something you can't tell what. Is that what we deserve, we, humans? We may have done things wrong, but we have already understood it, and have paid the prize. Why do they keep destroying our world? Why can't they go to back their planet, and take their **** minerals with them?!?! Why?? ...why?...only questions...no answers...

A tear drops from her eye...

But suddenly, she collects her last powers, and says: "I...I won't let you to take me like this! I...I will...I will die happily! I will live a happy ending!
And after saying that, she notices, that the pain has gone, and she closes her eyes, dreaming the last dream of her life....

PS: it may look like part 1 and 2 has nothing to do with each other...you can consider them as different stories if you like...

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