Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 8:19 pm Post subject:
Meteor City
Subject description: My second map
Hello, again. This is a map that was planed for a mod for RA YR but, I never posted it and never got off the ground. Oh well, here's the story
-------------Story line(Not mod)------------
In the night of 2040 there was a meteor storm. A meteor hit the center of the city and kill many people. Then GDI thought it was a nomal meteor and left the city to rebuild and then after a few days the meteor cracked and seeds carried by the air covered the city. Mutants were every where and GDI locked down the city. Then after a few weeks the mutants appeared to scared or they start dieing if they get hit with strong light. Then GDI put up Light towers to prevent the spread of the mutants. All civilians flee to GDI protected areas.
The map is looking pretty good, but I see some issues ...
The city lacks detail. You need much more cars, parking spots, light posts, parks, maybe a train station. You shouldn't repeat buildings too much. Try using some ponds aswell. There should be some dirty pavement with stuff on it. Try putting crates and palettes on the ground some places.
You don't have any detail where you have clear ground. I sugest that you add roughy and sandy ground in there. QUICK_EDIT
Because he has sooo many buildings to choose from.
No, he doesn't, but he has placed them unwisely someplaces. Repeated buildings are OK, as long as they don't repeat too much within an area. QUICK_EDIT
Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 6:34 am Post subject:
wow
wow i like city map .... keep making buddy _________________ Rules Modding and SHP design , ask some thing ?
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Meteor City
wow
