I think the beginning is a little long maybe, but otherwise it's great. What about going into detail about the objectives instead where you maybe show a small clip of each new unit, or if you're taking out a superweapon, show it's effects on some distant base or units or whatever as a warning? I'm just giving this as an example so that the load screen gives an overview it's not the exact same screen after it comes back from a black screen. _________________ "Don't beg for things; Do it yourself or you'll never get anything." QUICK_EDIT
You need to sync the sound at 0:04 better. It ends too quickly.
Also the spotlight on the units is hard to notice.
-A few flashes on each, one after another, would look good.
-You can make them fade-in.
-You can try grey, black, or strong purple canvans for the icons.
I don't suggest you take all 3, because it could get overcrowded, but you can try them at the very least.
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