The new Fan fiction

gufu · Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 2:24 am Post subject: The new Fan fiction

Sorry for it being a little MODed:

"DUNK!" - shouted captain after getting hit by part of the nearby landed shell. NOD artylery was deadly only because it was about 500 meters away. I could only get in range he would be able to take out F****** driver. Another explosion took out wolverine only few meters away. The shell flew too close this time - and I knew my life would be over after next shell will flew out of the barrel with whistling noise. Suddenly I heard a humming of helicopters engine. Artilery exploded five seconds later into fireshow by explosive shells provoked by heat seeking rocket of ORCA fighter. After a while when whatever was left of the squad get back on feet. About then the ORCA transport had landed and bunch of medics and engineers apeared. The medics had lots of work on they're hands ,while engineers tryed to repair near destroyed wolverine. One of the guns riped engineer who poked it with his nano controler. You F****** B**** you killed Jordan - one of the engineers shouted. After saying that he was taken out by someone hitting him with MPW. After getting healed we got back to out mobile outpost. The guy who was in wolverine was looking at us because he was scared what the guns would start carnage in the middle of the dropship. We were lucky that guy got out of the damn suit as fast as he could. Wolverine was send to it's destruction due to being completly imppossible to repair. We entered our quaters and fell on bad. I closed my eyes and fell into the darkness of my dreams.

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DUNK!

gufu · Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 10:15 pm Post subject:

What no comments?

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DUNK!

Durrandi · Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 10:25 pm Post subject:

...ok. that is all I can say

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Tyler Adams · Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 11:06 pm Post subject:

The captain says 'DUNK!'?

What are they supposed to dunk?

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Clazzy · Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 12:10 am Post subject:

Quoted.

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Von Kriplespac · General **Joined**: 01 Sep 2004 **Location**: Somewhere

*COUGH*

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Tyler Adams · Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 1:17 am Post subject:

Burn.

HAHAHAHAHA!

Why is it that my good writing gets no replies and Gufu's.. well.. umm..

Anyways.. why does mine get none?

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Morpher · General **Joined**: 28 Jan 2005

Gufu you should be writing books, your bloody brilliant, words like "DUNK" really bring such a good feeling to the atmosphere! The way soldiers fall on their bads, I hope soon they fall on their goods, that will teach them. Anyway keep this up, maybe one day when its translatable we can make actual decent sarcastic posts on whats wrong with it. Confused

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daTS · Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 2:41 am Post subject:

*puts face in hands and shakes head*

*sees an artillery*

DUNK!!!

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Von Kriplespac · General **Joined**: 01 Sep 2004 **Location**: Somewhere

daTSchikinhed wrote:

*puts face in hands and shakes head*

*sees an artillery*

DUNK!!!

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Elerium-155 · Commander **Joined**: 07 Mar 2005

daTSchikinhed wrote:

*puts face in hands and shakes head*

*sees an artillery*

DUNK!!!

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Denmon · General **Joined**: 12 Jun 2004 **Location**: /S/weden

it could have been good if it wasent so horribly misspelt. Use google to check your words if you think that you misspelt them. Thats what i do sometimes!

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